Its an interesting idea, but I think I think this can much, much tighter. It drags on too much and feels like a short, short film as opposed to a trailer. Get to your punch line "who is... much quicker.
Its an interesting idea, but I think I think this can much, much tighter. It drags on too much and feels like a short, short film as opposed to a trailer. Get to your punch line "who is... much quicker.
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