Direction Unit: Development

After receiving feedback from my peers during the group crit session, I have decided to change a couple of shots in my 3 minute film. To Identify that the male character was a paranormal photographer I had a extreme close up of his pass saying "paranormal photographer" but my peers suggested that perhaps I should show this in a different way, e.g. show some of his pictures he's done on previous jobs or show him putting up a note at the front of the park saying "paranormal photographer at work". I have taken these ideas into consideration and will most likely use one of them.