The story is set in a contemporary urban setting
(London/Maidstone area) and shows a male in his mid-twenties woken up by his
television and alarm clock. This young man is George Figgs, he has a
wife and together are expecting a child in the next few months, he works for a
company called "Enigma" who specialise in covering up the stories and
secrets of celebrities, MPs and anyone else who is under the public eye as
court acts like injunctions and super injunctions have become meaningless
and useless against the media. One day George is called into a boardroom
meeting about a new client, an MP who has spent thousands of pounds of tax payers’
money on his new condo and wide selection of expensive cars. George is put in
charge of covering up this story and hiding it from the press and is told that
this has to be done urgently and as soon as possible. Soon enough George gets
cracking on with covering up the story but later gets distracted when he finds
out that he has forgotten that today is his 1 year anniversary of being married
to his wife. He quickly leaves work to find a present for Anna (his wife)
totally forgetting about his assignment. George manages to find a present for Anna
and takes her out to a 5 star restaurant for a romantic dinner and a couple of
drinks. The next morning George wakes up dazed to find out that he is late for
work and that his story has been leaked to the press and has caused public
outrage. He rushes over to work only to get fired by his boss and violently
beaten by security guards. He returns home to tell Anna that he has been fired,
she asks him what happened but he refuses to tell. The couple break into an
argument where George gets violent and physically harms Anna; she runs out the
house in tears and phones the police. Meanwhile George shocked by what he has
just done has a mental breakdown and crawls into a corner sobbing uncontrollably,
police sirens are heard outside the house and the story ends with George on the
floor still crying with his head buried in his arms.
The genre that I am aiming for is Dark Drama/Thriller which
I tried to show through how a man started out with a happy family and ended up
with nothing. This is only the first draft so can and will be edited. Hope the
story didn’t bring you down too much.
James
this has some potential - but at the moment it is not a story, and what's there would not fit into 10mins. I like the characters' job. interesting. But what happens after that is just events happening to him. Its not a story. A story must be about a problem being faced and solved, with either the character losing or winning. Concentrate on a single meeting.
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