Major Production: Script Changes

In my most recent tutorial with Helen, we were discussing the scripts and both agreed that 1 minute shorts were too short to get the story across meaning that certain endings are lacking and not as funny. So instead of doing 15 1-minute shorts I will be doing 5 3-minute shorts instead, which meant that I had to cut 5 of the 10 scripts which I already drafted and extend the other 5 so that they can meet the 3 minute mark. So far I have extended 1 of the 5 scripts and plan to expand the rest by the end of the week, so I can e-mail them off to Calum (the actor playing Liam).

Now that I am able to extend the story to fit into 3 minutes, I can now take examples from other youtubers who release sketches on a regular basis. At first I was only taking examples from hit youtubers Smosh but now I am taking examples from other youtubers such as Rhett and Link, Tomska, Corridor Digital and Shane Dawson who all release videos and sketches lasting around 3 minutes. Below is a video by Tomska, it's a sketch called the Fallen, I am using it as an example as it has the same humor pattern which I want to replicate in a way.