Tuesday, 23 September 2014

Major Project: Tennis Club: Episode 6: The Tournament Part 2

Over the past week I have been writing out story plans for each of the episodes of Tennis Club. This episode plan was written today and is mainly just me getting every bit of the story written down so this isn't exactly a formal way of presenting it. I will get round to making it more formal after I have laid out the way I want every single episode.

In short this is an episode about the aftermath of the argument between Bobbers and Toby, despite the title the episode doesn't focus as much around the tournament at all, it's more about how Toby regresses and becomes an introvert again but this time worse off than ever. Ross, Katie and Elsie try and patch up things between the two.

Out of all the episodes I've planned so far I'd have to say this one is the least developed so will need to work on this one more than the others. but below are my note about the episode.

Tennis Club episode 6: The Tournament part 2

We see a young child sitting in a classroom reading a book, he’s by himself, the bell rings and loads of students flood into the classroom. A couple of them notice the small boy and ask him what he’s reading, he says it’s called Clown in the Classroom. One of the taller children says that he’s reading a baby book, he gets the whole class to join and all the ten year olds start shouting “Toby is a baby, because he reads a baby book” Toby tries to call out to get them to stop, tears welling up in his eyes, the teacher walks in, Toby looks to her for help but she just tells him that he should read books more for his age and the kids continue to laugh at him.
We see a young Toby arrive home, it’s the same house we saw in episode 4, Toby calls out for his Dad, there is no answer. He takes off his backpack and slings in to the side by the door. He walks into the kitchen, a tallish, stern faced man wearing a shirt and vest is sitting at the table reading a newspaper. Toby says hello once more, the man replies this time and asks Toby how his day went, the young Toby says that he was bullied again, the man doesn’t even look Toby in the eye, he just asks who he was bullied by. Toby answers that it was the kids and the teacher, the man sighs and lays down his paper, he leans forward and looks Toby in the eye, he tells him that if anyone annoys you or starts getting on your nerves, just ignore them, don’t even acknowledge their existence, Toby says that everyone in that classroom annoys him, the father just tells him to ignore them all then, Toby then asks what if he wants to make friends. The man picks up his paper once more ceasing eye contact with Toby, he asks if Toby wants to be friends with the people that annoy him? Toby answers no, the man goes on to say that in which case he doesn’t need friends, Toby thanks his father who tells him to go to his room after their conversation.

Toby wakes up, he looks terrible, he’s unshaven, his hair looks greasy from not washing it for days, there are dirty plates stacked up on the bed side table where his alarm clock used to be. His phone starts buzzing, he notices it’s someone calling him but just rolls over and ignores it.
At the office we see Katie on her mobile, Toby isn’t picking up. She has a worried expression on her face. She scrolls through her phone again and puts the phone to her ear again, this time the person picks up, it’s Elsie (who’s driving whilst using the hands free phone), after exchanging pleasantries Katie asks if she’s seen Toby at all, Elsie says that she rang him a couple of nights ago but he wasn’t picking up so assumed that he was dealing with stuff from for the Tennis Club. Katie tells her that he hasn’t come to work in about a week, this has panicked Elsie quite a bit, Katie goes on to ask if Ross has told her anything, she says that she hasn’t spoken to him in about a week, Katie is kind of confused by this she asks if they’re still together Elsie says they are but when they meet they don’t speak to each other, it’s what Ross prefers apparently. Katie gets back on to the subject, she suggests that Katie pay a visit to Toby’s apartment to check that he’s okay. Elsie says she’s right on it. The sound of screeching tires can be heard over the phone, Katie now knows one thing never get into the same car as Elsie.

Toby is still in bed, he looks like a slob in his vest and boxer shorts. The doorbell rings, Toby doesn’t bother to get up, it rings again and again and again and again. Toby makes a massive groaning noise and forces himself out of bed. He shouts at the door that doesn’t want any leaflets about Jesus so go away, the doorbell keeps on ringing, Toby gets pissed off and decides to open it, at the doorstep is his sister, who’s looking really pissed off but Toby isn’t fazed, he even tries to shut the door on her. She stops it from closing and asks what’s the matter with him, Toby says he’s fine and tells her to go away. Elsie isn’t going to just go home, she starts point out that he looks like shit and hasn’t been to work in a week, she’s slightly surprised as well, she’s never seen him like this. Toby can’t be bothered to send her away he just leaves her on the doorstep and goes to sit in the lounge hoping she’ll see herself out.  As Elsie walks through his apartment she notices all the rubbish on the floor, on the table in the lounge is a half-finished game of solitaire with the cards covered in old Dorito dust. Toby is now slumped on the sofa watching Countdown, Elsie tries to address him and find out what’s wrong but nothing is of use, he just sits there giving one word answers, she goes on to voice her opinions saying that she’s never seen him like this. After the third time she asks if anything is wrong Toby snaps and shouts that nothing is wrong, but Elsie can tell that something has really gotten to him. She asks how Bobbers and Ross are doing and if he’s spoken to them at all. Toby has answered all her questions up to now, this one he just stays silent, she moves onto the tennis tournament and asks how preparations are going, Toby replies saying that he’s not going to the tournament anymore because he quit the club, seems that things are getting somewhere with this conversation now. She asks why and Toby just says he can’t be arsed with people anymore, he starts saying the same things he said to Bobbers, that they all lie when they need something from you, etc. Elsie stays quiet for a second, she gets up and starts to leave, she says she’ll be back later but Toby doesn’t reply he just watches the TV as she leaves.

In Marco’s café Ross and Bobbers are sat down in silence. Bobbers is looking out of the window not looking as cheerful as he usually is, Ross sits quietly opposite him. Ross asks if he wants to talk about it, Bobbers snaps and asks why he’d want to talk about it, Ross says it’s obviously getting to Bobbers who doesn’t reply. Ross then asks when he’s going to apologise to Toby, Bobbers snaps and asks why he should apologise when Toby’s the one that started it, he gets in a huff and starts looking out the window again, silence once more Ross asks if they’re still going to the tennis tournament, Bobbers calmly says that of course they’re going to the tournament, Ross points out that Toby has the only racket the rest are the waffle bats from poundland or a cricket bat, Ross doesn’t want to go back to crappy equipment he wants Toby to make up with Bobbers but Bobbers is stubborn, he doesn’t want to talk to Toby because he called him a liar and a loser. Ross asks him if he really did go to school with Toby, Bobbers says he did, Ross tells him to tell that to Toby and explain himself, Bobbers says that he doesn’t need Toby anymore and that he can run the club by himself again, just like the good old days. He pats Ross on the back and leave the café and his fat friend with the bill.

Later that night at Elsie’s house Katie and Ross are round talking about how they want the guys to make up so Toby doesn’t become a introvert again. They devise a scheme to try and get Bobbers and Toby to become friends again, Ross says that Bobbers isn’t willing to tell Toby the truth because he insulted him, Elsie points out that Toby won’t leave the house so they’d have to bring Bobbers to him. Katie says they sound like teenage girls, but then has what she calls a stroke of genius.

It’s late at night and we see Ross knock on the front door of a shabby looking house, who else opens the door but Bobbers. He asks why Ross is here at this time of the evening, Ross just says for a chat and points out that he like Bobbers’ new painting on the wall, Bobbers turns to look and out of nowhere Ross chloroforms him with a white rag across his face. Bobbers is out for the count Ross slowly drags the lanky body over to Elsie’s car. Katie questions where he got the chloroform from, Ross says he got it from old Bill. Having not met the guy the girls ask who “Old Bill” is, Ross explains that he’s the tennis club’s 4th member he also says that he’s a magician. The two girls look shocked at what Ross has just told them about the suspicious old man who hands out chloroform willy-nilly. They say they’ll deal with it after this.

Toby is still on the sofa, it looks like he hasn’t moved since Elsie left, he wants to change the channel but can’t reach the remote, he struggles before giving up and watching the same shit. Suddenly the front door bursts open, Katie and Elsie stroll in with Ross behind them carrying a now awake but slightly dazed Bobbers. Katie makes a mocking comment about the state of Toby’s apartment, Toby starts to question why they’re all in his house, Elsie explains that because he won’t leave his apartment and Bobbers is stubborn they brought him round here so the two of them can sort things out. Bobbers’ drunkenly says that he won’t apologise for shit until Ross backhands him in the face to wake him up, Bobbers becomes aware of his surroundings and asks why Toby’s here, Toby says it’s his house and tells Bobbers to get out. Elsie interrupts and tells Bobbers to stay and sort themselves out, Toby calls Bobbers a liar again, Bobbers retorts calling him a dickbasket, the two continue to throw insults at each other, realising that this is going nowhere Elsie instructs Katie to slap Toby if he gets out of hand and Ross to do the same to Bobbers. The two guys don’t like the sound of that and each get a slap in the face for disagreeing. Elsie tells Toby to explain himself, he says he doesn’t want to and gets a slap from Katie. He turns to Katie and says she’s enjoying this too much she agrees and slaps him again. Toby goes to say that one of the main reasons he joined the tennis club is because he thought that Bobbers could be someone he could trust since they were in the same school and what not but Bobbers has screwed him over so much and now that Toby thinks that Bobbers has lied about everything including the possibility that Bobbers went to school with him, he doesn’t want to trust Bobbers any more. Elsie then gives Bobbers the chance to speak, Bobbers says that the reason why he wasn’t in the year book is because he was sick on the day they took photos so they didn’t include him, Toby calls bullshit on what Bobbers just said, they would have included him anyway, Bobbers admits that that was a lie and gets another slap from Ross. Bobbers admits that he was expelled from secondary school for what he says was being too funny, that’s why he wasn’t in the year book, Toby says that still doesn’t explain why he isn’t remembered by him and Chris. This is something Bobbers can’t explain he thought he made an impression on his classmates but he obviously didn’t which makes him feel a little disheartened. Toby’s final question is to why Bobbers started up the tennis club. Bobbers falls silent. This seems like something he really doesn’t want to admit, he even says so, Ross says that if he doesn’t answer he gets another slap, Bobbers says he’ll never say why he started it up but after another slap from Ross he starts to confess. Bobbers says that they only reason he started it up was because Toby was right when they last saw eachother, Bobbers doesn’t have any friends at all apart from Ross. He felt like he fucked up in school and missed out on making friends so the club is a desperate attempt on trying to make new ones. The room falls silent. Everyone seems amazed that beneath Bobbers’ oblivious jolly behaviour lay someone who just wanted to make friends…well everyone except Toby of course, he brushes it off as another lie, he says he’d rather be alone now than associate with these two (Bobbers and Ross). He tells everyone to leave and don’t bother coming back including his sister, he says that they all annoy him. They all leave under Toby’s command, none of them try to fight back, they just let him do it. As they all leave Bobbers says he’s sorry for one last time and Elsie tells him to take care. Toby sits in the lounge again by himself, alone. Just what he wanted, but we can tell from the look on his face that he’s still not happy.

The next morning Toby is woken by a phone call from Chris, it’s kind of strange but he answers it. Chris tells him that he remembers who Bobbers was, much to Toby’s surprise, he goes on to say that his real name was Robert Wellington or something like that, but he insisted on being called that stupid nickname. Christ starts making fun of Bobbers calling him a loser when they were in school and he deserved to be expelled for being a dickhead anyway. This slightly angers Toby, he calls Chris a dickhead and hangs up the phone. He then realises the date today, it’s the day of the tournament.

Outside a large leisure centre Bobbers and Ross are keeping true to his their word. They’re both dressed in white tennis outfits and holding their substitute tennis rackets (cricket bat and waffle racket). Bobbers asks Ross if he’s ready for this, Ross doesn’t seem sure he’s sweating a whole lot and looks kinda constipated, he suggests turning back Bobbers is about to agree but someone runs up behind them, they turn to notice Toby also dressed in white with his tennis racket in hand. He says that he’s sorry about what happened back at his apartment and hopes that the duo will forgive him, Bobbers smiles and says he’s glad to have Toby back. Toby jokes saying they’d be lost without him anyway. The trio go on to play in the tournament and do their best!


Montage - Their best isn’t enough, each of them get absolutely destroyed, tears are shed, dreams are crushed etc. imagine the chariots of fire song just with the three guys losing miserably and Toby shaking his head. – fade to black

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